23
Oct
07

The Tale of the Weeping Ghost

Of all the nights I love the most
It’s Halloween each night I’d host
I’d spend my life dressed as a ghost
A moaning, wailing, scary ghost….

Last night as I lay deeply sleeping
I was disturbed by footsteps creeping
And the eerie sound of someone weeping
Who was it softly weeping, weeping?

My heart beat with a growing dread
As a spectre formed beside my bed
Grey eyeballs hanging in its head,
Such dread eyeballs in its head.

The room reeked of its rotting bones
It opened its dead maw and moaned
And spoke to me in mocking tones,
I shan’t forget its mocking tones,

“You made a wish that every night
Was full of fear and mortal fright
Your wish fulfilled ‘tis my delight.
Oh yes, oh yes, ‘tis my delight.
Tonight you can forget sweet dreams,
This eve shall only bring shrill screams,
Welcome dear to Halloween,
Your own eternal Halloween!”

My deepest fears were now in sight
As my body’s life and breath took flight
My eyes grew dull and lost their light
And I screamed in pure and mortal fright.

The weeping sound that I had heard
‘Twas me, in ghostly form, interred
Crying, wailing, most disturbed
Pleading for my life preferred.

My mind could not believe my eyes
That wish I’d made now seemed unwise
There was no one near to heed my cries
But the spectre with the hanging eyes.

The spectre, with contempt, he spat,
“Calm down, my dear, enough of that!
For nobody likes a scaredy cat.
A crying, mewling, scaredy cat”

So this is how I pass my time;
For living days I moan and pine
In self pity at my own decline
My foolish, foolish, sad decline.

So, dear reader, please be warned,
Be careful what you’re wishing for;
Lest you end up, for evermore,
A ghost that’s scared of its own form.

Chefleur

23.10.07


10 Responses to “The Tale of the Weeping Ghost”


  1. 1 shewolfy728 October 23, 2007 at 2:05 pm

    I love it!

  2. 2 Vi October 23, 2007 at 3:46 pm

    Good writing, Chefleur. I have chills and duck bumps after reading your poem. Talk about creepy…it’s more than that.

  3. 3 traveller October 23, 2007 at 4:52 pm

    oh dear, what a dreadful fate!

  4. 4 lorigloyd October 23, 2007 at 5:21 pm

    Wonderful!

  5. 5 marimann October 23, 2007 at 10:22 pm

    Bravo! Edgar Allen must be spinning in his grave with jealousy- if he’s really dead, that is :)

  6. 6 Heather Blakey October 24, 2007 at 7:37 am

    I agree with Mari that this ghostly poem has all the hallmarks of Edgar Allen Poe. Wonderful work. I must get in here and explore more of the wonderful work on display.

  7. 7 Kitty October 24, 2007 at 8:13 am

    Ahhhhhhmazing!
    Love it. Every word.

  8. 8 Chefleur October 25, 2007 at 12:34 am

    Thanks everyone. I must admit I turned to the great Poe for inspiration…The Raven obviously…it started out as a short piece (posted at caprice), but I had to pad it out and give it a proper beginning, middle and end. I had fun!

  9. 9 Joanne Austin October 26, 2007 at 3:25 am

    Bravo!

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